08/21/2026
One sentence got me TWO new leads.
Not a new website.
Not a new funnel.
Not a new ad campaign.
One sentence.
While I was getting StoryBrand certified, I started applying what I was learning to my own marketing in real time.
I changed my introduction from:
"I'm Rebecca Bertoldi, your friend in marketing."
to:
"When coaches want to get leads from their websites, I'm the girl they call."
Before I even left the training, that change generated two new leads.
Why?
Because "your friend in marketing" might sound nice... but it doesn't tell you what I can actually do for you.
The second version gives you an immediate reason to think:
"Wait. I want leads from my website."
Clear beats cute.
Every. Single. Time.
🎥 Watch the full video in the comments.
Take a look at how you introduce your business. Is it clear enough that the right person immediately thinks, "I need that"?