22/05/2026
The formula I use to rewrite every client's offer description. Steal it.
I help [ideal client] achieve [specific outcome] using [your method], without [the thing they hate].
❌ Before: "I help coaches build their businesses."
✅ After: "I help Nairobi-based coaches book 3 paying clients a month using a structured Instagram system, without paid ads or guessing."
Which version would stop you mid-scroll?
Now write yours. Drop it in the comments. I'll give feedback on the first 5.