10/06/2024
This needs to stop.
It's seems like everyone these days is starting their sales pages like this...
Not just sales pages, even ads, Banners, etc
It's usually one phrase
"Are you tired of"
Example: "Are you tired of wasting money on useless products?"
"Are you tired of wasting money on ads?" etc
Avoid starting with negative assumptions about the reader’s current situation.
If you want to sell you need to build a positive relationship with your reader
Starting with negative assumptions can put the reader on the defensive or make them feel judged, which is not a good way to build a positive relationship.
Instead you can start with a statement or question that resonates with the reader's desires
Example: "Are you looking to get more ROI from your ads?"