Shine Editing - Fantasy Fiction Editing

Character development, story arc, character arcs, plot holes, and point of view inconsistencies are my passion, with a healthy dose of constructive compliments. I offer both big-picture feedback (critiques), as well as line-by-line suggestions that cover developmental editing. I enjoy looking at developmental aspects such as character arc, world-building, magic systems, foreshadowing, narration, p

oint of view, subplots and plot development. When you choose to work with me and opt for one of my editing packages, you will receive suggestions covering pacing, structure, flow, and story arc. We can discuss your thoughts on your story objective and theme, as well as touch on your intended audience, genre, or what would be the ideal reader for your story. At all times, I endevour to help you maintain your author’s voice throughout your manuscript. When you hire me to do a deeper dive into your manuscript, I will look out for grammar, spelling and word choices that may interrupt the flow of your fantasy story as well as give you feedback on dialogue and narrative authenticity, scene flow, tension, setting, and inconsistencies, and help you iron out character consistency throughout your story.